For years I have avoided using a semicolon, for fear I would do it wrong. It was almost the same with a colon, except that I knew it was useful for setting off a long list.
When I looked up the use of the semicolon I was surprised how simple the rules are for when to use it.
I thought I would share with you what I’ve learned.
One job of a semicolon is to link clauses that could stand alone as sentences, and that have a close relationship. The linking should be more effective than leaving them as separate sentences.
Here is an example:
The old man fell asleep whenever he began reading the book; the novel was obviously boring.
Why not use two sentences? Although each sentence could stand alone, they are closely related, and the point is better made by using the semicolon. Joining them with “and” would water down the effect.
Another job of a semicolon is for lists in text, or often in footnotes, where a dividing mark stronger than a comma is needed. Often we find this use of a semicolon in non-fiction writing to separate references.
Here is an example:
Attalos’ commands: with Alketas, Arr.4.27.5; with Koinos, Arr. 4.24.1; Meleagros, Arr. 4.16.1; 5.12.1; 6.17.3; Krateros, Arr. 4.16.1.
Notice that at the beginning of the list, after Attalos’ commands, we have a colon. This marks the beginning of a list, so we have a use for the colon in this sentence as well.
The colon is often used to separate a general statement from one or more items that support it. These explanations need not be complete sentences, but could be more like a list.
Here is an example:
I won’t be going to the party for two reasons: I have nothing nice to wear, and I haven’t been invited.
Other kinds of lists can also follow a colon.
My grocery list had several things on it: milk, eggs, sugar, flour, and baking powder.
After you learn the use of semicolons and colons, and after my shopping is done, I could make pancakes for you.
That’s confusing…
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It’s not an easy thing to use these marks correctly. I think that’s why most people, including me, tend to avoid using them if we can. Don’t lose sleep over it, John. I doubt you’ll ever need to use these marks, but if you decide to write a book you might want to revisit this post. I do appreciate you even looking at it now.
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I don’t intend to write a book but have seen other bloggers use these marks. I hope that I am correctly punctuating my blog daily though… ☺️
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You can get away without ever using these in blog posts, so I wouldn’t worry about it, John.
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We are that informal? Okay!
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Sure!
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I’ve noticed that an em dash is often used these days in place of a semi colon. 🤷♀️
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An em dash is usually used for interruptions, or interjections, but maybe I can do a post about dashes another time.
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A post on dashes would be great!
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I had originally commented that I’d do a post on that soon, but when I looked back I found that I had already done that post back in March of this year. Here’s the link: https://annelisplace.wordpress.com/2022/03/23/hyphens-and-dashes/
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The em dash is one that was referred to above. I like your brief definition: “It is mainly used to set off words or phrases that explain something in the middle of a sentence when an abrupt separation is required and a comma won’t do the trick.” Excellent for clarification.
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Thanks, Grant.
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Well done. I use both and probably wrong! When I want a thought closely connected to the original sentence, a ; seems appropriate.
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That sounds reasonable. If in doubt, ask your editor. 😉
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Kurt Vonnegut said the semicolon stinks and simply should be avoided; I agree.
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Hey! I LIKE that!
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I do enjoy using semi-colons Anneli, But I also love em-dashes. Your example: I won’t be going to the party for two reasons: I have nothing nice to wear, and I haven’t been invited. How do you feel about replacing that colon with an em-dash? 🙂
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I would be okay with replacing the colon with an em dash in that sentence if there were only one reason following it, but when there are two (or more), a colon would be better. The em dash is good for setting things apart and emphasizing, or interjecting, but when it starts to look like a list, even a short one, I’d go with the colon.
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Thanks for the feedback. 🙂
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It’s very easy to get carried away with em dashes. I know a writer who used them instead of quotation marks to introduce each sentence a character said. Overkill, to say the least. Also, using too many em dashes gives the text a chopped up look.
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Thanks for sharing your writing wisdoms. 🙂
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It’s great to share ideas, Debby. I don’t blame you for wanting to get away from semicolons and colons though. I avoid them whenever possible.
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Not bad at all, Anneli. Thanks for the examples and explanations. 🙂
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Thanks, Diana.
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